Saturday, 4 June 2016

What was in Mrs Oakley's lunchbox today? Descriptive Writing.

Mrs Oakley’s lunchbox

By Jaykob and Maddison

Today in Mrs Oakley’s lunchbox there is something that looks like a brown and crumbly rectangle.


It’s as flaky as a Cadbury’s flake blowing in the wind.


It feels as crunchy as a sweaty sock that’s been left to dry in the sun.


Just like a dry old sock it feels harder than Mrs Oakley’s cast.


It smells like a field of wheat and dry like a desert.

I hope you  have a better dinner tonight, Mrs Oakley!